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True Rose
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True Rose |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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A teasing morning breeze tickles the palms, coaxes a silvery leaf percussion. Come afternoon, it licks the bay into frosted curls, curves against a sloop’s bow. She responds with swollen sheets and glides, rolls in elation, never minds when she capsizes. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Sounds like fun! Smilin' here |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
My kind of sail...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful!!!! 
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. Love the display of this...simple, brilliant...like the waves she rides. TD |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all! corinne |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful, beautiful imagery, you never cease to amaze me |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely beautifully described |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You slipped in some sensual sounds, sis...  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Amazing.. love the delicate sensual feel to this. Keeping it. Maree What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I like this very much. Its right where my mind is at these days. Its would be nice to sail the warm breezes in Cali.Of course without the capsizing part.  But reading it a few times, I think I read a completely different meaning into this gem. One wonders what hidden meanings hint at themself in the poets mind. We may never know. Parker |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Your imagery -- splendid! Light and unique...I'm going to read you more often.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now that was a beautiful and thrilling rose! Watch out for the thorns, now, okay!  .....jo |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ratleader, thanks for resurrection this one from the great beyond! Thanks Iliana! Corinne |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Exquisite imagery; delicate, and sensual. Must read your material more often. CG |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne I love the layers in this. Your poetry always leaves me nodding my head. And the photo, not Marina Del Rey, but Eureka! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
The sisters insisted I read, again...  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly, CG! And i yours! Martie - Ah! I was in that neck o' the woods last Thanksgiving, en route to the Oregon Coast. Pretty country! And thank you! Corinne |
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