Open Poetry #32 |
Tight Jeans |
Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
If I keep playing around. One of these days I'll get it right. Hope you enjoy.I have posted the poem so you can read. This is not coming out to clear. This is based on the TV show Nashvile star and some of the comments. Hugs Bon-Bon Tight Jeans Tight jeans, city lights City rain, rolling thunder Crashing against my windowpane The city beckoning to a country boy Guitar in hand armed With melodies resounding in his head City boys, fancy suits Go home country boy You don’t have the look to be a country star Tight jeans, city lights City rain, rolling thunder Crashing against my windowpane The city beckoning to a country boy A trail of cigarettes and heartbreak Dark bars, cheap bottled wine Weak friendships, strong friendships Stay country boy You will be a country star Tight jeans, city lights City rain, rolling thunder Crashing against my windowpane The city beckoning to a country boy The look Tight jeans, black hat, framing his smiling face The mountain has been climbed Attained notoriety Country boy now a famous shining star His words flowing across the air waves Words of his life, his struggles His words; Tight jeans, city lights City rain, rolling thunder Crashing against my windowpane. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhBonnie~ I watched it ... and salivated through the final three, two, one picks ! On downright TALENTED AND SEXY ... the second place dude had my hot little breath all over the screen~ But that little winner was a talented little cutie pie too ! Thanks for this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Yepper Marge that little ole Brad Cotter has pretty twinkling blue eyes and a sexy voice. George was a hunk also with his kind of deep voice. Yum........! Now why am I saying yum they are not chocolate, heehee, sure would like to give them a lick. Hahahaha. Being bad ...I know.I voted for Brad..... Bon-Bon |
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