Open Poetry #32 |
Charms and Signals |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This scent of you that catches me in turquoise veiled breeze Taking me in lavished warmth that floods my veins in please A force that blindly humbles me in colors hue of spring The rain that stirs in April skies ‘til May comes out to sing This you that brings such vivid guise of all that flirts my mind The richest dreams of ever had come forth for me to find Utopia reigns full content, resumes another dance My garden blooms beneath the touch of supple glint romance The berries ripe to stream my neck in perfume tainted sweet And peaches in a luscious state to grace my plate complete The sun is warm, the moon is full, each star a candles fire And all about my space requites complete and full desire Your scent the wind of mystery to find me in its spell And every image in my mind could not begin to tell The full that all your presence bears etched clearly and so sure This scent of you the essence of, all that could want no more Copyright Kkh 5/1/04 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Once again, nodding, (yer gonna get sick of me if you aren't already) this is just stunning... You wrap desire in eloquent lacy foil, m'lady. I'm so envious. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, she certainly does..doesn't she!! You are exceptional K. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A special thanks to both of you for always encouraging me. It is never un-noticed, and always appreciated. To have praise from so many excellent authors here is an honor indeed. Hugs, TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"The berries ripe to stream my neck in perfume tainted sweet And peaches in a luscious state to grace my plate complete The sun is warm, the moon is full, each star a candles fire And all about my space requites complete and full desire" Deeeeeelicious poetry! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! what a descriptive imagination you have! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Just gorgeous, absolutely ENTICING, every line of it! Love, Margherita |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
TD, I could have copied this whole poem. Your imagery and color is delightful. I enjoyed this very much. Sadie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen, you appear to pen these so effortlessly. Beautiful piece of work once again. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh, this is magical, a delight! Corinne |
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