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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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I remember watching as the sun sank deeper into the earth. It left ebony dreams. Nightmares. And rain-drops wafting through the skies. Acquiescence then... Resting on the lawn with prayers and pleas, requests, and "Please God... hold his hand tonight." Desolation covers what he still can't call his own. All he ever wanted was to never be alone. He was a man of sorrows |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhAlyssa~ This is so gently tender ... kind, loving and caring~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are such a beautiful person |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
GG, sweetie bug, you are a remarkable writer! (He is not alone for he has a pure heart praying for him in you!) ......jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Alyssa, this is very beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed, Alyssa! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Marge, thank you so much  Just too bad that all the caring in the world can't change things for him...Dix, takes on to know one Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
iliana, thank you not so sure I am, but its great to hear... You're so sweet!Margherita, Thank you for your kind reply.Denise, Very generous of you... thank you Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
GG, Iliana is right. You are a remarkable writer, so full of depth and compassion. I had only one stop I could make tonight, as it is incredibly busy here. I needed to visit to relieve May stress. I'm glad this was the stop I made. Just feeling the compassion you have makes me have a better attitude toward things. Take care, Alyssa. Sadie |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Full of emotion, touching. Enjoyed. Susan |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
GG ........ This is very nicely done. Good rhythm and word selection. Very good. Bob |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sadie, what an honor, to be the one stop you made. You're an incredible writer and person so to hear that from you is just awesome Thank you so much! Take care, too...Susan, Glad you enjoyed thank you...Bob, I'm very glad you think so! Thank you Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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