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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2004-05-09 01:34 AM

A single tear fell from the eye
of she who’s destined but to cry
Brought on by love’s own hollow lies
the laughter’s gone from life, but why?

For once, aglow with hopes and dreams
she shared her thoughts and lover’s schemes
But words of love he didn’t mean
She sees the truth without love’s screen...

Through eyes of pain, which can’t deny
a broken heart, from every lie
too tired to even wonder why
One single tear is all that’s left
escapes her eye...

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

GlisteningRain
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

1 posted 2004-05-09 01:44 AM

That was a sad poem.

The last line could have been omitted maybe. If you want. lol. It just seemed to lessen the power of the poem. or maybe instead of "all that's left". let it go.."One single tear escapes her eye.."

truly,
B

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2004-05-09 01:50 AM

Sad but beautifully written.
:-)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-09 02:03 AM

beautiful...

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2004-05-09 04:49 AM

Thank you, B, for your thoughts....~S~

Thank you froggy...~S~

Thank you Passing Shadows...~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-05-09 05:24 AM

Great poem, Sunnyone. I liked the graphic, too.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

6 posted 2004-05-09 06:45 AM

Thank you iliana, and the graphic just seemed to fit the moment!! Appreciate it, dear friend! ~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-05-09 08:18 AM

enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2004-05-09 08:27 AM

A single tear fell from the eye
of she who’s destined but to cry

...sometimes I think that is "I"

many touching lines, Sunnyone

M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-05-10 02:20 AM

Know this feelings...James

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

10 posted 2004-05-10 12:36 PM

your work is always good!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-05-10 03:51 PM

SunnyOne~
Felt every tear-laden word of this one, dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2004-05-10 04:24 PM

So very beautiful yet so sad Sunny...
The pic is perfect and I very much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

13 posted 2004-05-10 05:06 PM

Listen to the music, sunnyone...
let the sounds do their healing...

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