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Open Poetry #32

an affinity for....

SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2004-04-30 11:06 PM

and everybody's swearing
up and down and
left and right
that they're in love
that they've done
their fair share
of kissing
eyelashes and fingertips
brown eyes in the morning
blue eyes at night
won't you
make up your mind?

in a room
somewhere
sometime
there is a feeling of
indifference
splinters from the floorboards
stuck inside skin
the sting is
par for the course
an inaudible whisper
floats its way to the ceiling
"you. after everything,
it was you."

he had golden hair
and silver fingers
that he couldn't stop from
channeling
the song
falls upon walls
without ears
"infinity will come for me
infinity will come..."

and everybody's swearing
up and down and
left and right
that they're in love
and at the end of the day
they are all
muttering muffled murmurs,
"romance is dead."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-01 03:53 AM

yep!

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

2 posted 2004-05-04 09:24 PM

I found this to be quite interesting. I am unsure of its meaning. I do have a couple of ideas, but am unsure. I enjoyed reading this.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-04 09:32 PM

Enjoyed the read...very well written.
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

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