Open Poetry #32 |
Love's Lustful Desire Fades Too Quickly |
PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Oh to the lover's act, I remember well; that has long resided the hands of time- yet still to this heart will forever dwell, as this heart beats for the loving crime. The moon shown so lightly upon thy face, as the cool crips breeze fell to thy lips- it were true of time, that love doth erase, as the moon was silhouetted, by our eclipse. Such a magical realm hath first appeared, as those crimson lips first fell to mine, oh and how all those thoughts were revered, as our two bodies were molded to love's design! Such a lasting kiss, time merely endured, yet its time, might as well lasted eternity, for such an act, this heart to love was lured- tho' love's lustful desire fades too quickly! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed it does well written! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes sadly it does that. but is it better to have not lusted and received at all? i think not carpe diem, thats all we got |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
It sure can be fleeting !! Hope |
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