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hold her like a cello.
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hold her like a cello. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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written in my mind are the words, i told you so..over and over i should have listened to my gut tears blurring my eyes my thoughts like fog. whisper your sweet words of revenge as you glare into my soul like you want a peice of me.. but baby,you already have everything. hold her like a cello,play her like a fool been there,done that thanks for nothing. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chelsea~ This is an intense read~ Loved the title ...~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
but at least you'll be smarter next time? |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Hold her like a cello...but pluck her heart strings. I like this...very nice. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very good analogy...I like your style...very good read |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 I understand. Wonderfully worded. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
hold her like a cello,play her like a fool been there,done that thanks for nothing. OUCH! I was thinking along other line when I opened this poem and therefore surprised. Well written INclan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh I love this...wonerful!! Hugs~
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