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This Photograph |
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Always Lisa Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 133
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This Photograph A hero lived and caught my knowing gaze. This photograph has seen its better days. A face became a copy of his kind. This photograph is all that's left behind. Then time and fate erased his charming eyes. And green of youth, unspoiled boy and wise. He bleeds to page and ages with my rhyme. This photograph has seen a better time When boys were boys and life was endless fun. Then time was spent below a loaded gun. His death became a photograph to hold, And words in lines until my body's cold. This photograph has seen its better days. This photograph in mind is where he stays. Always Lisa copyright, April 28, 2004 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a sadly beautiful piece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bittersweet write...much enjoyed. Hugs~
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Wow........! Sad and beautiful at the same time. I like it. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Though this is sad, it is written beautifully. It touched my heart.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And green of youth, unspoiled boy and wise. He bleeds to page and ages with my rhyme. Lisa, this was indeed an extraordinary write...lovely |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
A heartfelt tribute to a loved one who is deeply missed. Enjoyed! |
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