Open Poetry #32 |
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The Simple |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
The Simple I found the simple tucked inside The scares upon a welted hide Resting in a fools delay Lost somewhere along the way Underneath a film of grime Waiting for a moments time To show itself in simple flair As simple as a touch of care And with that touch a world born new More clearly viewed and much more true Set a field of greenery A deferent look of scenery In truth it was the same I saw But viewed within a minds report And thistles that had once drawn red Was now subdued and put to bed I empathize with those that need And say to plant another seed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
everything always seems to clear in the light of a new day, the marvel and magnificence of the way of things...glorious morning to ya sir...wishing you and yours a lovely day |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This is a renewal of hope and faith,Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sy, how uplifting and inspiring these words are! Very nicely done m'friend..very nice indeed. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In truth it was the same I saw But viewed within a minds report And thistles that had once drawn red Was now subdued and put to bed I empathize with those that need And say to plant another seed ~*~ Sometimes a wee bit of effort can make things just that simple... Smiling with you, Sy... ![]() ![]() |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah, to plant another seed...in field or mind to see what will grow. Of course at our house we just burn off the pasture every Spring and then watch a black turn back to green in a week or two. Lovely contruction. I enjoy reading your work. INclan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice afternoon read here Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In truth it was the same I saw But viewed within a minds report And thistles that had once drawn red Was now subdued and put to bed I empathize with those that need And say to plant another seed ============================== me thinks I will plant your divine rhymes and watch Eden bloom!! ![]() ![]() *ww* ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
In truth it was the same I saw But viewed within a minds report And thistles that had once drawn red Was now subdued and put to bed I empathize with those that need And say to plant another seed Seymour, this is such wisdom you have written!! Sometimes we worry so about things that are so unecessary to worry about...such simple things. Have a wonderful day..... ![]() Hugs, ![]() Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are a sheer joy to read...always. Eric |
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