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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2004-04-28 01:48 PM

winds shift,
i catch their scent
stalking the grass subconscious

a target of infected thought
i find myself enclined
some days,

to let them all
devour me.

*rewrite(needs work) of an older poem titled prey

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-28 01:53 PM

Ooooh love the thoughts here Raph!!
Good stuff.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-04-28 02:41 PM

Made ME see bugs and such...
I like this, Raph!

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2004-04-28 04:34 PM

I have seen awareness, and acceptance...perhaps fulfillment, in the eyes of prey taken from a distance...as if in the moment just before the moment, they knew.

This topic is worth exploring more, and you are off to a great start.

Thank you for the raw honesty of it.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-04-28 04:52 PM

Oooh Raph, I lerrrve this one

and I'm going to keep it Bello.

Mxx

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2004-04-28 06:38 PM

"stalking the grass subconscious"

now that's a poem all by itself...I can understand the inclination to just leave it that, but I'd love to see this unwound too.

Hugs.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2004-04-28 10:54 PM

Pull A string, A Puppet moves

Charles Bukowski

each man must realize
that it can all disappear very
quickly:
the cat, the woman, the job,
the front tire,
the bed, the walls, the
room; all our necessities
including love,
rest on foundations of sand -
and any given cause,
no matter how unrelated:
the death of a boy in Hong Kong
or a blizzard in Omaha ...
can serve as your undoing.
all your chinaware crashing to the
kitchen floor, your girl will enter
and you'll be standing, drunk,
in the center of it and she'll ask:
my god, what's the matter?
and you'll answer: I don't know,
I don't know ...

*far superior than any words i could muster or expand upon

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2004-04-28 11:46 PM

Indeed, Raph...

Fair enuff.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2004-04-29 12:20 PM

sometimes, you hurt my brain,
but
I like it,
ya know?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-04-29 03:18 AM

yeah...me too

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2004-04-29 10:56 AM

"infected thought....

let them all...

devour me."

And sometimes I do...

We are all fellable...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-04-29 12:25 PM

you have given today, much to ponder in your words...wise words to say the least...very much enjoyed! Thank you for sharing

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2004-04-29 12:29 PM

Thank you, Raph...and Bukowski for the inspiration.

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