garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2004-04-28
12:06 PM
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The heartache of broken showing in the hearts of those who are sad and lonely
Such pain hurt of rejection of a love faded with leavings of empty space within deep inner beings of
Of hearts now aching now broken with coldness within A void where completeness warmth once occupied
When I read of this devastation hurt, pain many heart cries looking for release of
You and I always come to mind...... Of how that even though when space is between we are sad and lonely
We are so blessed to have love for each other A love of desire and need passion and warmth
A love with fulfillment completeness in which hearts blend into one keeping us ever close even in distance
in this space that hurts so badly.......
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2004
Ethel GG Kent
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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posted
2004-04-28
12:31 PM
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Ethel... Where love is concerned, I believe that the purpose of that ache is like training is for an athlete...the sweet pain renews that desire, longing, commitment and devotion. You always touch my heart. Well written. TD
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-04-28
12:33 PM
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yes Ethel, you two are blessed
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Greeneyes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
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2004-05-16
11:20 AM
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I so understand this Ethel.....~~**~~ le vent chante avec le calme doux calme de nuit sien beauté sur mes lèvres ~~**~~
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2004-05-16
04:27 PM
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I know where you are coming from sweet lady. Heart hugs~~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~
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Kaoru
Member Elite
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
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2004-05-17
04:59 AM
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This is a wonderful poem.. I like the way you expressed it, emphasizing on certain powerful feelings..
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GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
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2004-05-17
05:34 AM
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yes... the space aches But the blessing.. the love, that is amazing Beautiful expressions Ethel...
Always, AlyssaPoems are made by fools like me, But only God can make a tree. Joyce kilmer
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2004-05-17
12:41 PM
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I appreciate and love you all.
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