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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Mind Yours You said it the other day, "what friends are for" It stays with me, more and more. "...to miss each other" when one can't be there. So true, you know, these feelings you share. If I could spend, a day in your mind, I wonder just what it is that I'd find. I promised these words from words that you shared. So true, you know, these feelings you bared. My bags are packed on this day before, turning back time, debating no more. My dreams on delay, untitled in dress, but to the friendship it wears, I acquiesce. For it seems to be timeless, always there when in need. A heart full of kindness, tender in seed. Fulfilling that warmth, the positives you see, facing what comes, and what comes facing me. No stumbling or faulting nor compromised word. Approachable, affable your mind opened, I'm heard. So I toast you this friendship and when I'm not there... These words are for you, "mind-yours" in share. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Approachable, affable your mind opened, I'm heard. So I toast you this friendship and when I'm not there... These words are for you, "mind-yours" in share. ~*~ Take care of that doll for me, lady...hug her well. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Darn it Karilea, they are all lined up staring me in the face... not much needed to finish...but family matters keep me busy and I will be gone for a few days and I just don't know what those days ahead will be like. When I come back I am going to try and finish them, although I will have company here...but I promise..this time for sure.  M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know she's in good hands... and she is exactly where she needs to be for now.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
No stumbling or faulting nor compromised word. Approachable, affable your mind opened, I'm heard. So I toast you this friendship and when I'm not there... These words are for you, "mind-yours" in share. Astounding write, the love and kinship projected right from your heart....very much enjoyed this read, thank you for sharing |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. Very nice. JL  |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Ah, "friendship". Emerson felt so strongly about it that he devoted an essay to it. Cicero wrote about it. And C.S. Lewis, in his book, "The Four Loves", devotes pages and pages to "Friendship". Nicely done. Nicely done. Bob |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
No stumbling or faulting nor compromised word. Approachable, affable your mind opened, I'm heard. So I toast you this friendship and when I'm not there... These words are for you, "mind-yours" in share. True friendship is so precious, Maureen. Thanks for sharing your special one.  Hugs, Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Lee, for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. Been a tough ten days or so and I just wanted someone to know how much their time given to me was appreciated. *s M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you JL, Ethel *s Thank you, Bob for bringing me the sunshine  M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful write, as always. Great lines, solid senses... TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
of course, you know I'm an "ending lines" person...and I love yours |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen Thank you for sharing another beautiful piece of your heart with us. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M lady -- I have a girlfriend like this and I am going to save your poem to send it to her. It's wonderful. Thanks for penning it. ...jo |
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