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Open Poetry #32

paint my face destroyed.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-27 09:42 PM

you could copy my face a million times
but you still wouldn't feel me
it still wouldnt be me..
you say "i need you...my friend"
well i need you..my love
paint my face destroyed
you say "i need her..my friend"
well i need her..like i need a hole in the head..

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

1 posted 2004-04-27 09:49 PM

Hi -- glad to meet a fellow traveller. This struck too close to home, my friend (sorry, could NOT resist that!) I wish I weren't so well acquainted with the feeling, so I could just have enjoyed the poem.

~~J

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2004-04-27 11:32 PM

I like it..
I can relate with this..
Thanks for sharing!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-28 03:12 AM

yeah....I know what ya mean

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-04-28 06:30 AM

~smiling~
knowing... understanding

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-04-28 07:49 AM

Title grabbed me.

Enjoyed.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

6 posted 2004-04-28 08:53 AM

I gotta say I liked this. Very unique. And the title grabbed me too.

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