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To My Father
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To My Father |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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To my Father, Sometimes I wonder why you bother. My ignorance was just lameness, Yet you were there and shameless. To my life donor, Refused to let me be a loner. When I needed you you were around, By our blood we're forever bound. So to my father, Thanks for taking the time to bother. Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very heartfelt words Snowflake ... more men should take the time to tell their fathers how they feel. Before it is too late. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
It is wonderufl to read such from a son to his Father.  Susan |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
so nice...just reading someone's personal thoughts. This makes me think of my dad, he missed some important stuff in my life (because he is an imperfect human) but he wanted to spend time with me and those times we had doing simple things are my fondest memories, the other things just got worked out later in life. I am just so thankful for my dad, 'cuz I know he loved me always. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is touching |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
touching..truly touching  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very heartfelt write Kyle...well done. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
well...he put up with me for 21 years so far so he deserved somthin =) Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sounds like you have learned that some of the stuff we had to do was from our hearts not just to hurt...love ya kiddo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so sweet, Snowflake. I've felt the same about my Mom and Dad down through the years. It seems that I was always having trouble of some kind or another. Hugs, Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This touched me in its essential beauty. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
just goes to show you, even our parents can make some mistakes...and yet, by some unknown unseen law, there is that forever bond...which never goes unspoken for to long. Very enjoyable read |
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