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PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-04-27 09:39 AM

She is an enigma to everyone
A dark cloud under the sun
Shadows are more easily held
And ghosts are more often felt
Than her whom I begin to deem
Is maybe nothing but a dream
She is a question upon my lips
Breathed in low, moaning sips
As I experience the unreal
Yet how is it that I can feel
Her in all my waking thoughts
And not the sleep for so long fought
She is the voice inside my head
The tug on soul upon which I’m led
Like a fish in the proverbial net
Ensnared, but far from death yet
Her in my mind I can plainly see
Though she remains always, a mystery

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2004-04-27 09:40 AM

seems to be everyones Unicorn these days..nicely done

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-04-27 09:47 AM

What wonderful expressions of the watery state of elusive and want.
You write so very well.
TD

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-04-27 09:49 AM

Oh, she sounds quite mysterious!
A lovely read, this one.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-04-27 09:53 AM

She is a question upon my lips...

a wonderful line *s
M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-04-27 10:18 AM

ahhhh huh, that's it, you've got it bad, that my friend, is the LOVE WORD.

In answer to your question on my poem, wrote it last year...I think?

Enjoy reading you, filled with mystery, curiosity and emphatic belief

Good Morning

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2004-04-27 01:46 PM

"And ghosts are more often felt
Than her whom I begin to deem
Is maybe nothing but a dream
She is a question upon my lips
Breathed in low, moaning sips
As I experience the unreal
Yet how is it that I can feel
Her in all my waking thoughts
And not the sleep for so long fought
She is the voice inside my head
The tug on soul upon which I’m led"

I know, it's almost the whole poem, but this is the part I liked the best....
awesome awesome write

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-04-27 01:51 PM

"She is the voice inside my head
The tug on soul upon which I’m led"

Yes, my "she" is always tugging on me...

She doesn't let me have much fun!

enjoyed.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2004-04-27 01:55 PM

A lovely write. Sometimes, she's best kept a mystery.

Corinne

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2004-04-27 02:00 PM

Very well done. She does indeed walk in beauty like the night.....

INclan

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