Open Poetry #32 |
Isopod: Life As A Pillbug |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Isopod: Life As A Pillbug It’s not hard, deadly simple to be a throwback. I should know, dead-ends have become a specialty in my precincts. Still I could at least assert that I am a bit ahead, his dead end also a dead beginning. We share much, though juggling fourteen legs would be beyond me. We two have such a talent for defense, curving inward, curling hopelessly into a gray seed in a world of birds. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
though juggling fourteen legs would be beyond me. oh my, can you imagine, 7 pairs of sneakers? Your writes are genious! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
14 legs...wonder how fast I would be able to move then *s M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now here I was today trying to compose a little something around whirligigs... and you write of pillbugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee 14 legs..that's seven pairs of getaway sticks. Loved this one Ed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
humming the whole time, I would imagine. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
dingus-- YOU WIN THE WASHER AND DRYER!!! You just made my day, bud -- that is exactly what I'm talkin' about! Folks, dingus-mon is referring to another poem of mine, that I posted almost two months ago..... /pip/Forum88/HTML/002114.html Thank you for remembering, Larry.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My bet would be that'd you'd manage those feet just fine... and heaven help the bird that thought you easy prey. *G* This is excellent, my friend... light and dark curl in on each other here... but the result is a softened heart, not a hard bead. |
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