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Sonnet, for Michael Auguste
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Sonnet, for Michael Auguste |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg 
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Sonnet for Michael Auguste, in response to a painting of his. I scarcely know the man---but I have seen The colours of the ocean lined with fire; The torrents, and the water of the pyre Undermining dizzy sailors---blue and green, I have seen the surface twist in icy sheen As single helmsmen onward press'd---aspired To challenge walls of water, twisting higher Than any artifact---and yet the scene Could so enchant the sensitivity Of one who, walking idly on the shore Brought forth his hand and shaped into his vision The helmsman's plight---aligned so beautifully That, in sweet silence, we could see the roar The ocean makes, and feel it to precision. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How beautiful. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, make sure you send this to him...he will enjoy it SO much... I know, because I do, too... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, Michael will love this. Beautiful. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes Brian...please sent this to Michael. Beautiful indeed and to an artist most worthy. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Brian I have seen the painting you speak of, and now know it even more intimately through your words. Thank you for this.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful tribute to someone who has had to deal with so much. I've never seen the painting you speak of save for the vision you so lovingly painted in your words  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Brian I forgot to tell you how nice it is to see you here...it is! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So beautiful, Michael will adore it. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
May I say that was not only an exceptional poem, but an outstanding gesture on your part Brian. I hope you will not mind if I put Michael's painting of the ship here for viewing?  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Bri, can I hug you for this write?It's a beautiful piece, so true to the feeling of Michael's art, and proof of the depth of your poetic compassionate heart. And Sharon? thanks for posting this here, I've loved that painting of Michael's since the first time I saw it. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
a gorgeous write |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I loved this poem and it is perfect for the painting Michael has done. both are first rate! Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I had the words |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A beautiful poem..a fine act of friendship....a noble and gentle gesture...well done Brian...if only more people would act with as much altruism to fellow humans.... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Brian, what an incredibly beautiful tribute. This sonnet flows wonderfully, and captures the flavour of both the sea ... and the artist himself. Michael is a brilliant artist, and your poem has touched me in such a warm and heartfelt way. Within the depth and beauty of this piece, you have portrayed the perspective of an admirer of his work not only on canvas, but of the man behind the brush as well. Beautifully written, Brian ... you are a master of the sonnet, and your tribute is to someone I hold dear as well. Very much enjoyed.  Best wishes and hugs to both you gentlemen, /Kit |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Local Parasite - Michele's talent shows through in this painting. I would love to hang this in the lobby of the Lodge... My best to him... Bill Charles |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Brian, Well done. No one ever said that life was fair. At least not anyone who truly understands. Michael may God grant you peace and rest and may you continue to be an inspiration to us all. God bless... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A most excellent write! |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Your Sonnet is breath-taking. I'm sure Micheal will just love it. Awesome! Intense! Kudos.... Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem rings with the beauty the artist has put in his painting. I can feel the power of your words and the clearness of his vision...Magnificent... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brian, what a beautiful poem you have written for Michael. I know he will love your wonderful words. I know that I do. If you don't mind, I would like to leave this URL to Michael's website, so that others can see his paintings and his poems. I know that he would appreciate that. http://members.tripod.com/~augustfire/index.html Heart hugs to you both, Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~ Breathtaking~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can't find the words due to the lump in my throat. you are a caring friend to all, thank you for that. hugs |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A beautiful sonnet and an awesome picture.. Thanx for sharing these....and Michael.... please know we are with you each moment of your day....and I am praying for you and that your pain is bearable.... Always, Barry (Magnus) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how beautiful the feeling of being truly touched by another in his/her written stories |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You write a beautiful sonnet, m'friend. I'm sure Michael appreciates this very much, and I'd like to convey my own prayers and thoughts to him as well. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Brian Excellent, indeed excellent...love this sonnet.... Fits the painting oh so well.. "As single helmsmen onward press'd---aspired To challenge walls of water, twisting higher" Love the sound of this.... Love the whole poem.. enjoyed ------ice ><> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is an outstanding poem!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, here I sit at my computer in a state of awe at the exquisite beauty of both your poem and Michael's painting... This show of appreciation for Michael's phenomenal talent, must surely be a much-needed tonic for him at this very difficult time in his life. God bless you both! Love & Eternal Light, Linda P.S. Thanks to Mysteria for posting Michael's painting in her reply! She is so kind and thoughtful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a very beautiful, compassionate write. Michael Auguste we are with you. I have been to your site. It is a wonderful source of beauty! Love, Margherita |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I want to thank Sharon for posting the painting for us to share. WOW!!!! Michael, I've neve the thrill of seeing your work before. This is a beautiful painting. You are indeed both a talanted poet and artist!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wishing Michael well and hopes this lifts his spirits! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Dropping in sending well wishes to Michael. Love the ship picture also. When the Tall Ships came here to Ohio I went down to see them and made a poem called The Tall Ships and had it printed in the newspaper. Sending out hugs from Ohio. Bon-Bon  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
He blooms. Even yet, he blooms...and so do you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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