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Your Own Muse
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Your Own Muse |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Your Own Muse Now, she and I have looked inside and there you in slumber, rest, dreams ride, sleeping in peace, mind in repose, but we stand by, watchful, and close in quiet chat and singing chant, your very own muse, and I singing softly, oh, so soft, this little bit of lullaby, for you had cried for her to come though all night, she was there, holding onto your precious thoughts with the most gentle hands in care. You searched for your most solemn muse, would not be swayed by our amuse, “neither droll nor witty will I write” thus stayed your pen throughout the night… Now, Serious was no where to be found though you looked high, low, and all around but your own sweet muse, your tender tones couldn’t find a place on paper’s home but still in inky blackness’ stream the tender tones swell in dream as shadows show you the heart of home for tomorrow’s write, a tender tome. .......for Maree |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A nice write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful gift for Maree, Karilea.. And how beautifully she does write.  Our muses do need a bit of a vacation from time to time.. but they never ever leave us! ~Hugs to you, Maree and our muses~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, what a beautiful gift for Maree |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What caring, sweet gifts you bring!  ...jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
but still in inky blackness’ stream the tender tones swell in dream There is nothing quite so special as the gift of words. What a lovely poem, to and from a couple of fine ladies. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I hope you sent her the link. I know it will make her smile...it did me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This has a soothing tone and flows beautifully on the page. Love, Margherita |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Karilea. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karilea, such a beautiful and precious gift. Thank you dear friend for standing close and watchful and for bringing me smiles this sunday morning. Love you  Mxx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
adding to my library Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, this is sweet |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Karilea~ Lovely words of encouragement and inspiration from one beautiful poetess to another. Patricia |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Now, Serious was no where to be found though you looked high, low, and all around but your own sweet muse, your tender tones couldn’t find a place on paper’s home Your a ray of sunshine...I know where you've aquired your name...beautiful read |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but still in inky blackness’ stream the tender tones swell in dream as shadows show you the heart of home for tomorrow’s write, a tender tome. ============================== as do your own rhymes divine.  ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I've always been impressed with your work as you already KNOW, but.... this is truly outstanding mum. Just outstanding.  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There is a plain(and I don't mean Kansas) on which some people write and you dwell there. Your word choice to convey your thought is always so sound. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beautiful! Beautiful! Beatiful! ~ A "Beautiful" for the poem, for Karilea, and for Maree!  Group hug, Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes when we write for others we find out more about ourselves. Thank you all for reading, for enjoying. |
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