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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-04-27 05:59 AM

When A Heart Loses Shine

The waiting gets harder
As I check day by day
Your silence is hurting
Have you nothing to say

I attempted reaching out
Everyway I could find
Surely you must know
You've been on my mind

All my mail going unread
I have to question why
I search for the reason
You have refused to reply

Hoping I would always be
Still worthy of your time
Silence is never golden
When a heart loses shine

Hope©2004

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2004-04-27 06:21 AM

Straightforward excellent poetic images.....Very nicely done!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2004-04-27 08:19 AM

Silence is never golden

I like that

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

3 posted 2004-04-27 09:15 AM

Oh!.... I felt this one.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-04-27 10:12 AM

I don't look anymore.
I don't expect anymore.
Then if it happens it becomes a pleasant surprise.

hugs
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-27 12:50 PM

I'm with M here on this one

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-04-27 01:13 PM

So sad. And probably too true for some. I enjoyed the read. Excellent write.
JL

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-04-27 02:51 PM

Tears of the heart. Let some sun in so they will shine in rainbow colors.
You always make me want to reach out in a big hug.
You write touchingly.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2004-04-28 02:03 AM

Hello Hope

I know how much you wear your heart on your sleeve and this was so very moving. My thoughts are with you, as you know.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2004-04-28 10:37 AM

Hope, this one relly touched my heart.
I sincerely hope that things are better real soon.
I know how it feels to ache and long for the one you love.
Here's a heart hugs

Ethel

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