Open Poetry #32 |
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Prove it to me |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
So yes...this would be a rant... I spent eternity in your arms last night Like I have so many times before I spent a lifetime in your arms Safe, yet wanting more… You looked at me with beautifully sinful eyes And pleaded softly to me your hearts case And I sat warm next you yet distanced myself from your heat Knowing the lies that have come from that handsome face You held me close and said Pookie I love you Prove it You stared into my eyes and promised it was the last time you would hurt me Prove it You must earn back what you have lost Trust is easily broken and hard to gain But if you work hard and you really show me Perhaps we can move on and forgive all this pain You said I was what you needed now and forever Prove it You kissed my hand and swore you would make things right Prove it I won’t lie, I want you to find me I’m falling, slowly into the abyss I want you to chase me and catch me before I land I’ll be here waiting for you, I promise that if you try I won’t let you miss I love you honey bear That much said is true… But do you want me the way I want you? …PROVE IT The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write...wishing all the best for the both of you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bella -- great write! If he truly loves you, I believe he will! Hugs sent your way. ..........jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
an interesting write...not sure whether "proving it" makes a difference...sometimes temporary proving is what comes from it. M |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Thanks for the comments guys. I really hope he does prove it to me because I care about him more than anything...but at the same time I do have that small feeling that whatever he does will only be temporary...sigh...I guess I'll just have to wait and see. ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Without a single doubt, you expressed your feelings vividly and with force. Should he read this, I don't know, but I do know this, you know what may come and what you may need to do. Enjoyed and Good luck! |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
my heart goes out to you ![]() great poem ... wolfy |
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