Open Poetry #32 |
Disharmonious |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Disharmonious My daughter with her hermit ways, wanted to find a place where she could rest from daily trial of ever faster race. She hurries home each evening to sweetness of seclusion. Her garden is her refuge where she's safe from an intrusion. As she sits on her patio with woodlands all around, she revels in the harmony of pleasant Nature sound. It is a soothing symphony where every note is true, until a raucous, rasping sound is added to the brew. It's penetrating, quite unlike the other voices heard. She can't say if it is human or animal or bird. This happens every evening amidst the sounds sublime, the harsh discordance comes again and lingers for a time. She's been searching through a field book to solve the mystery and all at once she finds it there as plain as plain can be. It nests in barns or tree hollows; the eighteen inch barn owl. Its voice a clicking, hissing screech. The owl's a foul voiced fowl. By: Joyce 4/26/04 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoyed this! It was a hoot! lol Linda |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
GREAT! And so-o true....jwesley |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Joyce Thank you for painting such a vivid picture that was so very much enjoyed. I've missed you at the Meadow and I hope all is well with you. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
This was so visual with wonderful flow...I loved every word! I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A great example of irony! Those owls can scare the daylights out of people; we had one in the attic of our farmhouse once when I was very young -- we thought the place was haunted! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a great write and the "intruder"'s voice really sends shivers down the spine, even though they have such innocent looks. Love, Margherita |
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