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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Is our itinerary in life deliberate? Or is an Olympic gambler, ripping us off Through a deeper justice, unchanging procedures Calculating wounds, a pioneer off balance Living in the not to distant future Wandering footprints return with rejection slips Lost footings could not pass, disheartened & grumbling They fall into a karmic offering Innocently toxic Possibility winks to the voice of Strangers…strangers we should know! Genesis of a legend, blind man’s bluff Takes a plunge, into acoustical signals Low tides at the marina eavesdrop Revealing absentminded Tahitian pawnshops Trading our bed of tropical green Enveloping the ability to see through glass The all inclusive package A lover’s dream never drains Summer will come hither Compromising national security Specific missions needing time and circumstance Waiting for nothing, our vision enhanced |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you write with such depth and understanding Lee...always a learning experience for me *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Yes all this and more. Good morning dear. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Extraordinary poem and one for me to ponder over from my library!  ....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm popping this one into my library also! Hugs to you m'friend. To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You make it all sound so simple, your philosophy and poetry in this write is outstanding. Way to go Lee J, another wonderful write. JL  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Waiting for nothing, our vision enhanced" This expressed my feeling of futility today. A very intelligent exploration of life in this'n, Lee. Enjoyed. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I had visions of Greek Gods and Goddess' controlling the seas and earth and our fate... Maybe it was brought about that I recently watched Sinbad with my daughter This was deep, thoughtful, and provocative to me. Enjoyed! |
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