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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-04-26 05:22 AM

Paused, on hold,
laying between the silky
sheets, cold,

Let me catch a breath,
caught between moments,
Is this life or death?

Blood rushing to my head,
dizzy, passing out, unconscience,
falling across the bed,

Is this where we are?
the in between?
am i still your movie star?

Fast forward, rewind?
playback, or start over?
love has not a mind,

Intermission, in between,
everything stops, frozen,
no popcorn, no icecream,

Press play, or restart,
never press pause again,
don't ever scare my heart,

Let it play,
all the way, till the end,
without interruption,

Without intermission...

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (04-26-2004 06:20 AM).]

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-04-26 05:32 AM

Very good poem...cryptic....but informed....
i like the analogy....

Thank you....

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2004-04-26 06:06 AM

Thank you Goldenrose for that sweet reply!

glad you liked it!

~ARH

Love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

3 posted 2004-04-27 12:17 PM

You still have the most romantic heart.
Always nice to read you.

Parker

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-04-27 01:05 AM

Thank You Parker you are so sweet, I am glad you came by, I miss your poetry...please write some and post!

~ARH
Love and Hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Obscurity
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream

5 posted 2004-04-27 01:50 AM

I agree with Goldenrose, the analogy was great. Simply pleasing to say the least! It gave me this cozy warm feeling.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

6 posted 2004-04-27 02:28 AM

I loved it! Simply put, I just adored it, the imagery the meaning the whole "she-bang!" Lovely write. *into the library it goes*
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-04-27 02:37 AM

Phenominal piece of writing! Loved it!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-27 02:53 AM

sounds like you are ready for anything that comes your way!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2004-04-27 05:56 AM

It's always nice to read the softer side of you, ARH
hugs
M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-04-27 03:10 PM

Very cute write and also very enjoyable.
Your romantic beauty knows no pause, the muse is always near!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-04-27 08:01 PM

Enjoyed...James

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