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Go ahead, tear apart my words…
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Go ahead, tear apart my words… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Go ahead, tear apart my words… Spell me in your ancient binding Latch me to your key Holler fore as to warn me Walk by my side if you would step with me Allow me to stand in your stead, I promise I shall stick fast… Whisper your soul that we might mate for life… Should I fall to sleep, to dream, please, then, wear me well… |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ingenious Dear Lady. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Whisper your soul that we might mate for life… Should I fall to sleep, to dream, please, then, wear me well…" Wow....just WOW!! Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Constantly exploring, exploring, exploring... if there's form to be found, you better count on Sunshine to shed some light onto them... It takes grace to treat an experiment with such humility, and the form is grateful to you... you've come up with something clever, compelling, that's not beyond its subject matter. It's nice reading you again, mum. Brian |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
please, then, wear me well… Yes, please do...love that ending line Karilea  Mxx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Clever concept. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very good one, enjoyed much! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You write far too beautifully for your words to ever be torn apart....other than through your crafty way of composing them!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very interesting write. Very nice! JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sent me off in my drifting mode.... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Great write K...there is a message here.... Thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh this was fun to read, unique...nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
awesome Sunshine...simply awesome...I'd pick you to play on my team any day, any way! An extremely powerful credit to you character, speaking volumns of who you are and what you stand for...Bravo!!!!!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Good morning Sunshine Another hand painted silk scarf write. loved this. ~Tier |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Stongly expressed emotions. believe in what your heart feels... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling wide... I was wondering what all those italics were about! *giggle* clever, sweet sunshine! especially the title, after considering... heh.  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Clever thinking, Sunshine! Enjoyed. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, I really enjoyed this -- looked like fun to write!  ......jo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done...and very cute, too! Enjoyed much. jwesley |
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