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Open Poetry #32

Yellow crystals

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-04-15 01:35 PM

She held yellow crystals
in one hand as she smiled.
With the other
a summon,
lonely breeze from the isle.

Those days by the Sea,
the softness once knew.
Magical it seems,
so close
and so true.

Now timeless
since passing,
our moments are still.
I know from one crystal,
that love never will.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-04-15 01:36 PM

whewww, this was so pretty, so soft and yet the last line sent it to print...outstanding write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-04-15 01:38 PM

Yes...magical !
Enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-16 03:58 AM

what an ending! wow!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2004-04-16 05:33 AM

Great ending...very good poem..

thank you....

Goldneose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2004-04-17 07:25 PM

well poe, you did it again, i dont see you much any more but each appearence is fantastic!

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

forne_marin
Member

since 2004-04-13

Posts 140
Spartanburg, South Carolina

6 posted 2004-04-18 02:56 PM

The poem runs around itself. It is ripe with symbolism and it's meaning is not immediately apparent.

But that's okay. That's poetry. It has a great beat and a great rhyme scheme and I loved the imagry. Good job.

But the most wonderful thing about Tiggers is I'm the only one!

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