Open Poetry #32 |
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The Soul of Song |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 ![]() |
The Soul of Song First, a slight echo of angst a slow roll of fingers over strings Now, give rise to thunder-toned drums so feet may find a fierce feeling for the floor .DROP THE BASS. And they'll stretch their hands so far into the air above you'll think their fingers hang from the ceiling like chandeliers of swinging gratitude The tiny tribulations of day's past languish in music's sound shadow to make free my temporal relationship with continuity, like kundalini rising.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Just in case! Kundalini means - the yogic life force that is held to lie coiled at the base of the spine until it is aroused and sent to the head to trigger enlightenment Hey, even I had to look it up at one point! smooth people stray by slinking onward to the limousine-society found in alleys hot with Humanity in passing |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
I like this. ![]() ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a very fine write, it just might trigger more than enlightenment from some readers ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() time to set those deep bass notes free |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Thanks for all the replies. Midnitesun, I'm most flattered that you had to read it again the next morning! Thank you! ~Chrissy smooth people stray by slinking onward |
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