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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

0 posted 2004-04-25 01:04 PM

Please do not turn away,
  from the shadow of my smile,
  for it is merely the yin of grin,
  bearing neither guilt nor guile.
My glasses may be tinted rose,
  yet they see your true of heart,
  this gaze is one from loving soul,
  and beholds your every part.
For when I really take a look,
  'tis then I truly see,
  beyond the surface painting,
  to within your inner sea.

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-25-2004 06:22 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2004-04-25 01:34 PM

and that's what's important

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-04-25 01:36 PM

Thanks for letting us see!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-04-25 01:45 PM

This gaze is that of loving soul''''

~
indeed it is...

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-04-25 04:54 PM

Dixie ~

Yes, it is the inside that counts! It is just a bonus when the outside matches the glorious inside! lol

Actually, I posted this poem in a hurry before I went out today and when I just now reread it, I had to make a gazillion changes! It flows much, much better now than it did! Mind you, knowing me, the edits will continue to be made until the editing window has closed within the next 24 hours!

Thanks for dropping by!

Linda

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-04-25 04:55 PM

iliana ~

You, my dear, are one who sees!

Enjoy your day!

EA

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-04-25 05:00 PM

Lauren ~

Gadzooks! I had to rewrite this poem just a few minutes ago! I left in a hurry after posting it and was mortified when I read it again when I got back! It was so disjointed! Oh, well, it seems to read more smoothly now!

Sometimes I have a difficult time putting a poem all together! It can take up to several tries and then I'm still not satisfied with it! lol

Love & Light,
Linda

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-04-25 05:17 PM

DearestEarthyOne~
Don't know what you did to it ... but it IS BEAUTIFUL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-04-25 11:20 PM

Marge ~

Yer sooo cute!

Thanks for reading and for the "BEAUTIFUL" reply!

Happy Spring!

EO

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2004-04-26 11:20 AM

(giggles) I can understand ever so much how when writing poems in a hurry they can look all loose later, hehehe! (smiles) Even when your angel wings are in a hurry you always write wonderfully, yay, God Bless You, I believe it is important to always be able to see a tear within a smile, or a smile within a tear, so we can reach out to one another in the most honest way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

10 posted 2004-04-26 11:46 AM

Your inner sea reflect such sweet beauty!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-04-26 12:06 PM

beautifully written, very much enjoyed

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2004-04-26 12:16 PM

For when I really take a look,
  'tis then I truly see,
  beyond the surface painting,
  to within your inner sea.

And everyone has that "inner sea"
that is nothing but beautiful.
I love this, Linda Lou. It is so YOU.
Hugs,
Ethel

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2004-04-26 12:16 PM

the inner sea

i see in thee

yes just splendid i'd say
beneatht the surface of the waves is where youll find true grit

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

14 posted 2004-04-26 02:01 PM

Noah ~

You, my dear, are one who looks beyond the obvious and into the inner sea.

Happy Spring!
Linda

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2004-04-26 02:03 PM

iliana ~

That was a very generous reply! Thank you, Kind One!

Happy hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2004-04-26 02:03 PM

Lee ~

Your pleasure pleases me!

Have a great day!

Linda

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2004-04-26 02:08 PM

inkedgoddess ~

Thank you, Goddessa!

"Beneath the surface of the waves is where you'll find true grit" ~ I like that!

Linda

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-04-26 02:09 PM

Ethel ~

...and your warm reply is so "YOU"!!!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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