Open Poetry #32 |
Touching |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Touching I’ve touched in life a soul or two An open door there are so few A warmth of heart that has domain Whose essence is a seeds germane A spirit that is host in trust That treasures every piece of dust That rises with the wind in flare And prizes every sense that’s there A feel that is no feel at all A voice that speaks without a call Eyes that look beyond desist And drinks the dew drops of the mist I’ve touched in life a soul or two An open door there are so few A warmth of heart that has domain Whose essence is a seeds germane They are the colored rainbows bend They are the treasures at the end |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, this is awesome. And it goes into my library .... and you have touched many more souls than two, believe me! Thank you for this Sunday gift! Love and light. Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I’ve touched in life a soul or two An open door there are so few A warmth of heart that has domain Whose essence is a seeds germane A spirit that is host in trust That treasures every piece of dust That rises with the wind in flare And prizes every sense that’s there A feel that is no feel at all A voice that speaks without a call Eyes that look beyond desist And drinks the dew drops of the mist I’ve touched in life a soul or two An open door there are so few A warmth of heart that has domain Whose essence is a seeds germane They are the colored rainbows bend They are the treasures at the end No kidding!!! And it's been OUR good fortune! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah, a nice peaceful positive outlook Sy A very enjoyable read from you this morning. Many many fellow human paths we cross and it's so good to experience the good in it all. Good morning to you and I'll pour you a cup of coffee. Would you like a hot muffin too? Have a good day! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy....this is especially beautiful. Very much enjoyed the morning read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy....this is especially beautiful. Very much enjoyed the morning read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I’ve touched in life a soul or two An open door there are so few A warmth of heart that has domain Whose essence is a seeds germane They are the colored rainbows bend They are the treasures at the end Oh yes, you have touched so many with your beautiful and wise poetry, my friend. This one is going into my Seymour file. and |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, you've touched many people with your wise words. You are indeed a rainbow's treasure. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A "touching" write. "Eyes that look beyond desist And drinks the dew drops of the mist" ~ Yes, indeed! Sip slowly, drink deep! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, you have |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A spirit that is host in trust That treasures every piece of dust That rises with the wind in flare And prizes every sense that’s there A feel that is no feel at all A voice that speaks without a call Eyes that look beyond desist And drinks the dew drops of the mist ===================================== and its in your "touchless touch" that we learn so much. I always knew Randy was a touchy feely kinda dragon. *lol* *ww* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You have touched more than a few souls here, Sey. Beautiful poem. [This message has been edited by iliana (04-25-2004 11:44 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Did you know you are on my list. Sunshine And so are you. ethome You didn't think I'd leave you off? Nancy, And you have been there a long time. garysgirl You know you are on the list. scorpio Without a doubt. Earth Angel Counting an Angel on my list was beyond my imagination. passing I would never pass by you. As for my Tinkerbell, I sent my personal representative Randy to let you know you are special. iliana, Did you think I forgot you. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
this is simply beautiful, very nice use of rhyme and meter -bravo! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Beki |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’ve touched in life a soul or two Including mine. *S* And you continue to do so, every day. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You are a love. |
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