Open Poetry #32 |
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Blood Rush - Ethel's giggle |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Blood rush Yesterday came to me as I verged up and out from beneath coverlets of warm quilting in the early morning gloam, scrutinizing, of all things, upside down memories… between that time of slender adolescence and teen, that tweak of instance when all is possible, when I had triangulated my head to the palms of my hands, down there, on the carpet triangle, triangle for balance then, placing scabby knees to bony elbows balance, balance drawing the string of invisible rope from hip to heel, feeling the pull, then pushing thigh to leg to feet up wiggling toes high over head and feeling the blood rush remembering… there was no one to spot me or spot me, so, in the quiet, just me, the carpet, the upside down stance, the blood rush the beat of heart felt in the top of my head and the bottom of my soul my bare soles waving freely in splits of limb with leggy length to balance, balance. I remember thinking, I shall stand on my head, always, swoosh the air with bicycling limbs, and feel this blood rush, always, for perspective … today, between that time of adult and aged, that tweak of instance when all is possible, I triangulated my head to the palms of my hands, down there, on the carpet triangle, triangle for balance then, placing creaking knees to fleshed elbows balance, balance I realize that the shift and heft of weight and time, of past and present, with some of my future behind me and some tomorrow still to lean toward… I breath, deeply, then, with the top of my head to the carpet, slowly, slowly don’t break any bones I edge my feet into the wintry air, Blood rush…. Always! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You tooooo! This is absolutely gorgeous, dear Karilea. A highly enjoyable read. Love and ... blood rush! Margherita ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WhoooHooo...she brought it back!! I love this, Karilea. That "blood rush" is good sometimes. And standing on the head kind of gets everything where it's suppose to go. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well if this doesn't make me want to go stand on my head!! ![]() Love it and the remember. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah....yeah those were the days |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Wow... what a great write. Can really picture this. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
even better than a sugar rush sometimes.. personally i love the swing, leaning back and letting my hair sweep the ground, works for me every time ![]() |
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