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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Reflections Concern for the moratorium of early years where there were countless hours of day and night… Where a friend was found without suffrage and plight where secrets were kept from open wounds, or light… Where the sea was endless, and its truths abound, where mom and dad could be happy at home… That time is gone to the forest to be burned far away from what I now have learned… The children have lost heart to decay and lies while parents are misplaced with social judicial tries… The hands on the Big Bend Clock are flexed and twisted too and the person in the mirror is asking, if it is really you… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad....so sad and true |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The hands on the Big Bend Clock are flexed and twisted too and the person in the mirror is asking, if it is really you… amazing, you had me at "concern for" brilliant write...Big Bend Clock and flexed and twisted...what deep despair you have brought the reader right into the core of your heart. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
This is very sad. It is very true that alot of children are lost to lies. Good Job. ~Laura~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The hands on the Big Bend Clock are flexed and twisted too and the person in the mirror is asking, if it is really you… Makes you wonder! Such a sad write JL, and so full of hard truths. Life is like that, whether we like it or not! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I agree.  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Concern for the moratorium of early years where there were countless hours of day and night… Where a friend was found without suffrage and plight where secrets were kept from open wounds, or light…" and this... "The hands on the Big Bend Clock are flexed and twisted too and the person in the mirror is asking, if it is really you…" very cool write |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words give us all food for thought. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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