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Open Poetry #32

Sweet Music To My Ears

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-04-25 01:44 AM

Sweet Music To My Ears

Chotto matte kudasai,
her sweet words
almost made me cry,
for as much as I wanted her
she had shown no interest in me.
I liked the way she looked
in her kimona, she was
a lovely sight to see.
So as I was leaving disappointed
her words were exactly what
I wanted to hear.
Chotto matte kudasai,
when spoken by her,
sweet music
to my ears.

JamesLee
April23
2004
Chotto matte kudasai-
(Japanese for)
Wait a minute please.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-25 04:26 AM

well done

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2004-04-25 06:09 AM

Thanks for the translation James......Nicely imaged piece...

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

3 posted 2004-04-25 06:20 AM

I want to know what happened after that!
Nice piece, James.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-04-25 07:24 AM

Your world is populated by sweet words and images, the disappointment can't last long.
Lovely.
Love, Margherita

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

5 posted 2004-04-25 07:23 PM

I'm noticing a theme here....

smooth people stray by slinking onward
to the limousine-society
found in alleys hot
with Humanity in passing

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

6 posted 2004-04-26 12:05 PM

And then what happened?!?!?! You've captured me...I look forward to the rest of the story!

I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-04-27 08:28 PM

Thank you for the lovely responses...actually there was a second part that I posted the same time...it is called..."Wait A Minute Please"...James

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