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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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red ribbon coiled another stripped within the shadows, boy. how many left i wonder before the final fig leaf? toss and turn to the scratch and claw of thought to surface like rats from sinking ships as another day sneaks through the blinds how many more we wonder |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
ah, but there is really only one |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It's GREAT to read you Bello.. and this is fantastic, I really love the thought behind it.  youI'm keeping it Mxx What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Now THIS---is what I'm talking about. Creative, bright, the dark sheds light on your subject matter. It makes me miss Mr. Squirrel, sort of, I wonder if he's hiding in any of the walls here? Very nice, I'll say that much---at the very least, you've got a grasp of subtlety that I admire. Brian |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent thought provoking post. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I have lots of perseverence. In the face of the alarm clock -- I almost always persevere in the hitting of the snooze button. another layer Raph -- lets see what's under the rest eh? good pen man |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Oh...it is good to turn your thoughts loose again inside my mind! Thank you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Tapping fingers on keys, really can't find anything to say. That's not a bad thing either. Keep writing, Rephy. K |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Perhaps Krawdad, it's finding it that's the problem Thanks bella always make me smile  Thank you grover thanks brian, subtlety is a great device but i'd argue some subjects call for raw or blunt emotion (Bukowski) Thanks Nancy Reb just scared of getting lost in the Shadow, there's a danger in digging to far perhaps? thanks icebox always a pleasure to see you Thanks mr frodo..er..Kamla |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Damn, you canadians got it in your blood! |
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