Open Poetry #32 |
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Zeus On the Ramparts |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
+*+*+*+*+*+ You radiate heat like the sun god Apollo, To the ends of the Earth, your glow I shall follow. Golden and glorious, you light up my life, You banish all darkness, all bleakness and strife. With trident so handsome, and comely to see, You reign as Poseidon, the god of the sea. On a throne of gold conches, you strike regal pose, And gift this mermaiden, with seashell red rose. Like Zeus on the ramparts of dazzling skies, I am mesmerized by the blue of your eyes. Your magical powers, indeed, do impress, And forever I'll be your angel princess. +*+*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-24-2004 07:52 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Great except my eyes aren't blue. ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thought at first that was a heavy title to have to follow with a poem . . . but you did, and did it superbly... jwesley |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Such a beautiful romantic poem..... mine has magic in his brown eyes, too. ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
what inspiration must this godly one be to bring this to verse |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Wow...what a sight he must be To evoke such creativity (And perhaps a bit of jealousy) Indeed he sounds beyond yummy! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Excellent Linda! Much enjoyed! Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is terrific - I loved the mythological cast to a romantic poem - Paul |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - yes, yes, they are blue indeed... BC |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Earth Angel, Loved this! nice; romantic--done expertly-not too heavy and not too light... Sadie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Might you be a Leo? lol ![]() Have a stellar day! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
jwesley ~ Yes, I thought the title was a bit "heavy", but perhaps a bit intriguing as well! lol Thank you for your thoughtful comment! ![]() Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ I believe it! Gary must have the same twinkle as my god, I mean "man", has! lol ![]() Loves & hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Keep up those aerobic exercises! Your clapping and jumping up and down, is good for both of us! ![]() Enjoy your day, Dear Dixie! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
inkedgoddess ~ Absolutely INSPIRING!!! ![]() ~ May your life be full of such inspiration! Happy Spring! ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
azblond ~ I like the enthusiastic way you express yourself! Yeppers, "beyond yummy"!!! Warm hugs, big smile! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ A "WOW" from you is a "WOW" indeed! lol Thank you! ~ May the gods smile upon you! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goodknight ~ Thank you, Paul! I appreciate your appreciation! ![]() ~ Have a glorious day! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ I know your eyes are blue! ~ Hence the poem! (but don't tell him that I said so! lol) Thanks for dropping by! ![]() Enjoy your day, my friend! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sadelite ~ What a lovely reply! Thank you, Sadie! May the sun shine down upon you this fine Spring day! ![]() Linda |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
lucky god.. er... guy..! ![]() shall we just call you Hera? ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Awesomely done EA....impeccably so. Yah dun gud girl.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Local Rebel ~ lol You is a punny guy! Olympian hugs, Hera |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry ~ Thank you for your mag-nanimous and enthusiastic response! I aim to please! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A nice read, Linda! |
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