Open Poetry #32 |
Objects Contain Importance. |
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I will mention the intoxication of objects now... The dime that is unaccounted for, lying down upon the floor, and unnoticed until I felt it cold upon my feet. This knife I used to cut into a red apple, I heard it scream, still sits on this desk next to a celtic charm bracelet that I've been meaning to wear. You could laugh at the humming of electricity in this house that moves itself. This house with invisible broken glass upon its floors. This prison without doors, surrounded by millions of tiny universes that lay on and underneath our skin. To us, these are also objects, unknown and veiwed with plain eyes. A needle that pulls thread it mends, just for you.. But do we appreciate this fixture of inanimateness that serves us in death? Yes. Because I describe them all inside of my head. These roses have been dead for months now, touched by dusty hands and noses full of lust. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't even describe it, but I love your style! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very pleasant read. Enjoyed this image studded poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These roses have been dead for months now, touched by dusty hands and noses full of lust. ~*~ I have a couple of very minor suggestions regarding your poem, but otherwise the imagery is wonderful! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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