Open Poetry #32 |
Always With A Scar On My Soul |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
ALWAYS WITH A SCAR ON MY SOUL For all that I have lost...for all that I long to be I look for a light...I look for anything I find comfort in the night...I find life in my dreams I look for my place yet all I feel is empty ...but always with a scar on my soul What do I run from...who do I run to I feel the ache in my heart with or without you I hang in the valley and walk this earth To fill my senses to find my entire worth ...but always with a scar on my soul I talk to the heaven...I cry to him above I laugh behind a mask just to cover it up I smile in the rain and I give thanks to the sky I hold up the mountain... though with saddened eyes ...but always with a scar on my soul I try to hold on...I try to let it go I've lived to be loved; a love I may never know You may have the power but I breathe the air I can close my eyes but you'll always be there ...but always with a scar on my soul I walk through the seasons...they walk with me I give of my gifts and love individually I live the moments and remember stories told I love the best I can...but always with a scar on my soul Sauni The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A wounded heart with hope. A palpable mix of feelings comes through in this write. Nice. Susan |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
This is beautifully written....the spirit lives on long after the body leaves... Enjoyed the read Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sadly beautiful |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
Very sad, and I can really relate to this one |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Well written. Enjoyed! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I havent seen you for awhile, it is so good to read you again Saunni and this is immediately a favorite for me.... I understand this and feel it. Hugs. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, I know about those scars...James |
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