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Theory of Glass
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Theory of Glass |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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I did not notice how dark it had become When eyes are closed there are no fine lines between horizons and clouds even -when you are near I, can not meet your eyes without wanting to run-- That I might miss, the feeling of turning you into someone that has lost their religion-- the half empty, half full glass: theory If I am an island let the skies hold tender mercy- glimpses I can not describe to you in unwilling motion and unheard symphonies as if there are no words left- any where I will be the storm at sea when your hands have missed my touch circling the champagne glass in crystal perfection brilliant – fluting noise in theory the glass: half empty ~~**~~ The sound of silence calls, I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling, lost in a dream The echo of our souls meet ~~**~~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
glimpses I can not describe to you in unwilling motion and unheard symphonies as if there are no words left- any where Lauren, sometimes the words just cannot be found anywhere...... Hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I am an island let the skies hold tender mercy- glimpses I can not describe to you in unwilling motion and unheard symphonies as if there are no words left- any where I will be the storm at sea when your hands have missed my touch ==================== an ocean of devotion...this is LAUREN-LOVELY... glass? ... me thinks its crystal, when held in your hands. .   ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
elegance comes not from the affectations of grace.. but from being one filled with grace |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Once again...an exquisite piece Lauren... I am starting to find words hard to come by to describe how your words make me feel. Love ya lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes I can only offer you a sigh. I hpoe it's enough. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, it may be half full, but it still sings beautifully...~you know that already~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Lauren, You have a connection with words and phrases that are indescribable. I don't know how to quite put my finger on it. For one thing, there is always the imagery that jumps out at me when I read your poems. "I have gone away. The bed is cold and empty. Trees bend their boughs toward the earth. And nighttime birds float as black faces. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Not to mention the grace and impeccable phrasing in her choice of line breaks, Opeth.  You have my total admiration, yet again, Lauren. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
If I am an island let the skies hold tender mercy- ~*~ A most intelligent writing, Lauren. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ooh, this is really neat. Unique. I really liked the read! ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lauren, I echo muted's comment -- she beat me to the draw!  ....jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Intriguing read. Being half of something is better than not being a part at all. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand this well |
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