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Open Poetry #32

Ember To Ash

Lady Of Light
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 31

0 posted 2004-04-22 09:05 AM

Just a spark
that could have been
   {for all we know,
    it should have been}
but fires are dampened
by rainy days
depends on the storm
if it goes     or stays.
Sometimes embers
         burning bright
aren't enough     to keep the light
from fading to ash......

[This message has been edited by Lady Of Light (04-22-2004 10:25 AM).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2004-04-22 09:33 AM

Oh, those slowly burning embers...

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-04-22 10:24 AM

Nice!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-04-22 10:26 AM

It is all about the imagery...grin.
Beautiful write.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-22 12:35 PM

well done

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2004-04-22 12:48 PM

well said, lady of light, well said.

Corinne

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-04-22 12:52 PM

Fantastic imagery!
Love this piece!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2004-04-22 05:05 PM

slowly burning is nice yes?

Enjoyed this Lady of Light

Have you any dreams you'd like to sell?

Stevie Nicks

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