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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As I wander throughout, new twists on words invade my mind. I become "lustworthy" but unknown to you... The attraction beyond explanation, triggered in jest. Maybe I am your blindspot or maybe I am just that easy going or so you think...with your emotional shortcomings. But don't fall into the fantasy. I am much more than this title presents.  M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
But don't fall into the fantasy. I am much more than this title presents. Never doubted you for a minute Maur, great title too~ hugs~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
interesting play on words and point well taken-we're much more than lofty words; I enjoyed this spirited write ~Sadelite~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Lor, sometimes that inspiration comes out of nowhere...know what I mean  Spirited...hmmm...that's the word, Sadelite thanks. M |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, if lustworthy means worthy of lust, I say you qualify......but, of course, there is much more than that. Pity those who can't see it  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
love that title...but you are right..you are soooo many things wrapped up into a beautiful parcel.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, you are so much more |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
but the title suggests so much more enjoyed this ms m |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
YEP! I agree... WOW! JL  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
you sure are great write M bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love the title...love this! Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah . . . but you KNEW the title would draw us all in!! Loved it anyway... jwesley Hmmm, probably go back for a second look when I see the title again.... me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you all. I thought a little lighthearted word play was due by me... and yes jw...I expected the title to catch a few eyes~~ M |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Nakdthoughts, I loved this piece, Cerenity |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Cerenity *s nice to see you M |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very nice.... and very true... regards sudhir |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Maureen, "Maybe I am your blindspot or maybe I am just that easy going or so you think...with your emotional shortcomings. But don't fall into the fantasy. I am much more than this title presents." ~ I am glad that you explained it in your final stanza, otherwise, I'd of been knocking at your door, especially after reading the title. Enjoyed! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yeah! |
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