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Midnight's Vine
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Midnight's Vine |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Her eyes, the blue of them unseen as movement traces behind closed and slumbering lids. What might the sight unseen be in the dark of night beyond the moon’s escape into tomorrow? Sleep, so vulnerable....yet, so aware and waiting to hear the slightest sound off key. Waltzing through an orchard of vintage grapes upon a dew laden vine. Come to me in dreams love, take lightly this hand that will swirl and twirl, as lips shall softly whisper of my heart’s desires.. The stir of a soft calf beneath lightest cotton, ahhh yes, perhaps she knows our dance upon the clover awaits...perhaps. The lightest trace of a finger’s tip upon a gentle curve, bringing the chill of shivering but warming skin...as an eye’s lid flutters and a smile is born upon the beauty of her.... Morning shall come softly through the window, finding the pillow of her rest, smelling the light yet tantalizing scent of her....as a soft shower pelts waking skin...and her memory aches to know what the deep of night brought to her. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good writing here..just perfect images thrown up by your words of love and respect...thank you... Goldenrose. Look for love and happiness... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now that...is passionate |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!!!!!! This is one huge SIGH!!! This is the romantic Barry ...oooh yesssss!!! I am smiling big time! And I'm starting to rambling and drool so I'll quietly take my leave.  Hugs YOU! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."and her memory aches to know what the deep of night brought to her." ~ Memory, don't fail me now! Pleeaasse! My oh my! You is one sizzlin' poet guy!  You rank among the best with romantic writes such as this!  EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Especially graceful and sensuous... I really liked this one. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your words capture magic and make it spill from the paper into my veins. This is most beautiful.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Barry, I found this poem left me with a sense of serenity and mystery at the same time (if that makes any sense). Enjoyed! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx to all...and Jo, I think you felt it just fine..... |
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