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Pink Sky River Lines
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Pink Sky River Lines |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Pink Sky River Lines  She is one who would adjust the skies to colors of sheer slipped pink, then ramble down long waterways just to charge me: Think! … Effervescent, like all her ripples that tumble down the stream, she should giggle, as she knows, all that she makes me dream. And yet, when forced, by powers claimed she gathers her wonders within, and sets about to stage the day then showers upon my ken. She wears her robes of nature’s leaves, goes skipping the stones so light ~ to fill our canvas of all we can see before she succumbs to night. A miracle of nature, we are, and be to hold in reverence, her mysteries. ~*~ Photo, courtesy, Queen Moth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Sheer beauty and a delight to read.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful...the words and the pic!! Love the new vacation pic of you!  ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A fine poem and beautiful photo too K...thank you.... Goldenrose. Look for love and happiness... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just 1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you write of the relationship between she and us with such bliss and experience very soothing |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed floating down this river this morning, gazing at the cloudless pink sky and your wonderful words!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmm, mmm, mmm. Love your photo too. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
She wears her robes of nature’s leaves, goes skipping the stones so light ~ to fill our canvas of all we can see before she succumbs to night. Beautiful Karilea as is your new pic! hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and "she" writes such lovely poetry as well.  Its so cool when you are well inspired and then compliment your lovely words with my photos... thank you. Natures poetry... where water and sky...meet. Beautiful Kari.  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Quite a beautiful match of word and picture. We do well when we pay attention to the world around us. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
As you read this one is suddenly aboard a small boat drifting lazily with the current, letting the oars slack and Mother river cradling us in her gentle arms.. These pics coupled with your words immediately send the reader into daydreams!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, A very beautiful, uplifting poem that I'd like to keep. The pic reminds me of a river where we used to canoe. miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I get so wrapped up in the visualizing and responding that I always forget to check the library box! Nowww, it's checked out properly! Thanks for the beauty! miscee |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful, both the photo and the poem..and like Fagin said.. both send you into daydreams. Makes me want to be there. Well Done! Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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