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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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candy coated rocks with sticky shimmer underwater looking in the desert there by no leaf trees where their makeup was pitted from the wind that walked in in high heel shoes and made sink hole prints on sunday mornings before the dawn turned on her miner's lamp and looked for the gold of a sunrise yawning and the songs too on the radio I remember them how their grooves were full of melted vinyl not yet thought as words ________________ Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
not yet thought as words ~*~ just those fleeting feelings knowing the best is yet to come... Well done, Sir...always a pleasure to read you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"before the dawn turned on her miner's lamp and looked for the gold of a sunrise yawning" Wonderful!! Very much enjoyed as usual DS. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dark one, as always your words are thought treats...thank you 'n hugs too. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "I remember them how their grooves were full of melted vinyl not yet thought as words" Amazing how you turn an image of thought into words! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Amazing! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Your style is very unique. Many good lines stand on their own. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, thanks for your early morning eyes, and your lady soft heart _________ Ms E, thank you so much for the touches __________ MS Donna, hugs to you, slow arm kind, thanks for your reads ________________ MS Martie, thank you lil neighbor, big hand hugs and eye talk. _____________ Ms Myst' Your amazing was wonderful, thanks for the review ___________ Ms Iliana, a texas sized thanks, and a larger appreciation |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kind of primitive in tone very unique and good |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this is so...smiling here. it's just... it's poetry absolutely beautiful, D good to read you again m'friend |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn you sure can write......I love the tone and pace of this poem and as always your imagery and message is way cool. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Dark Stranger, I think this is the first time I've read one of yours. It took me for surprise the first reading it so I read it several times more finding that I liked it a lot. Enjoyed miscellanea |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
amazing imagery as is your gift....love it! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sometimes we are blessed with such a feeling that life just doesn't get any better, and that makes the not so good times seem all that more signficant. When I was little, and something bad would happen, my mom would tell me, it's just life's nature, helping to make you stronger. Smiles and hugs...good one. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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