Open Poetry #32 |
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Random Acts v. Dark Intent |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Random Acts v. Dark Intent I’ve no mind for someone who weaves around their dark intentions and leaves sadness in their wake, I’d rather take the chance to bring a smile, not a frown to the people I chance to hang around. No one needs to stand alone, encumbered with dark, mean words interrupting slumber because they broke with words they spoke the essence of one’s life, someone’s dream just for a chance to pass around their mean. Ah, those with dark intentions come and roam invading lives, loves, romances, homes, an intruder, yes, with hateful caress, taking from those who have worked so long at a life’s vision’s dream, once lingering, now gone. I think in life’s long hall of justice here on earth if I were to have a case of any substantial worth “Random Acts versus Dark Intent’s Curses” then by passions of good people gathered forth we’d send those with dark intent far, far south of north. I’d banish them to their own Hell’s delights where they could then live with their own frights while here above we could love and continue on with simple, random acts of kindnesses sprinkled liberally with love, hugs, and comforting kisses. 30 August, 1999 ©KRJ ~*~ Repost by Request From Open Forum #1 Thank you, Dixie! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
but..but...what if a certain "toerag" has Random Acts of Dark intent with Balladeer and LongJohn...does that count? |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very true. Great write. JL ![]() |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Smiling at you Karilea, you really are the sunshine ![]() ![]() M Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Enjoyed this one. Toe, I think you're safe ![]() ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Reallly great poem and I especially am fond of that last stanza. I totally agree, Karilea. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you whisper...I listen |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
too young to be a sage but you got some sage dust on your sleeve lady..wink cool tunes in this one |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very true Karilea.. So pleased you brought this one back up. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Lady Of Light Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 31 |
I am so pleased this was requested as Ihad not seen it before and I agreee with every word of this, but then you already knew that right? ![]() |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Excellent write. I really enjoyed this, both for content and construction. Thank you. INclan |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I missed this, so glad I found it today! ![]() |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Well, isn't this a beauty. And thanks to Dixie for the request. Well said, m'friend. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh would that we could kindly act in such a manner as to free those of dark intent from the shadows and usher them into the light of love. Such pain is harbored in the dark. Enjoyed this. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
I thought this was a very good piece of writing...it's rare when I like rhyming, but you did it well. Thanks for the read. ~J.Lynn ![]() There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I’d banish them to their own Hell’s delights where they could then live with their own frights while here above we could love and continue on with simple, random acts of kindnesses sprinkled liberally with love, hugs, and comforting kisses. Well, you can play on my team anytime...I would like you on my side. Smiles and hugs Excellent write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Well enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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