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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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0 posted 2004-07-02 12:59 PM



My soul how it weeps for your
touch. The sweet smile upon your
face. Why did i wait so love to
realize how much I miss you...

Understanding you always were
cleaning my tears hodling my
head in your lap when I felt
as if I couldent go on.

It was you that loved me
you truly loved me and now
this is lost forever.

Ive bruised and batter your
very well being with my care
less toungue. My hateful words
the unspeakable actions Ive done
to you.

Now I'll have to live my life
with the burden of knowing I lost
my true love my soulmate my companion

I did not deserve you in the first place
I guess this is the medicine I have to take
life is a lesson and a hard one I learnt

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-07-02 04:52 PM


A heartfelt apology. Good luck, hope he reads this!

Copperbell
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2 posted 2004-07-03 01:52 PM


so sad

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-07-03 01:58 PM


It is an unfortunate fact of life that we often do not appreciate something until it has been lost to us. But truly, not all has been lost in this experience. You appear to have learned a valuable lesson that will hopefully prevent such a thing from ever happening again. You expressed your feelings very well and I wish you much happiness.

Sending you a warm, comforting embrace,
EA


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-03 02:49 PM


So sad, the word regret.  

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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