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Open Poetry #32

Wish you were here . . . Wish I was too!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-01 05:51 PM

tropical wind stirs
palm trees dance beneath sky blue
hula, hula sway

S.A.T.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2004-07-01 06:30 PM

I wish I was there too!

-Juju

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-07-01 06:31 PM

Mmmmm...I think I'm getting a case of wanderlust.
Good stuff Susan!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always.. Dancing with you in the summer rain~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-07-02 12:34 PM

Man now I wish I was in Hawaii. Beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-02 01:03 AM

Count me in, Susan!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-07-02 01:43 AM

Thanks! I needed that!

Aloha hugs,

Linda

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2004-07-02 02:12 AM

palm fronds are swaying
soft tropical wind blowing
playing with your hair

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2004-07-02 03:11 AM

cool imagery!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-07-02 04:11 AM

love that title! great write!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-07-02 02:37 PM

Smiles and Hugs to all. Interloper, loved your response. I'd love a breeze tousled do about now.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2004-07-03 08:41 AM

Been there....sadly....business, yuk....
beautiful waters....lots of ....well, a man
would get this one....sheesh...

Hope you get there...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2004-07-03 03:21 PM

Barry, I've been there and many other tropical places. Sitting here in the Northwest at this time, I can only dream. As far as the sheeeesh, yeah, there is much to make a woman go sheeesh as well

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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