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UniqueFreak
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since 2004-01-09
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0 posted 2004-07-01 04:06 PM


Its never been easy, for me,
To believe in someone new.
But I knew Id found something special,
When I came across you.

Honest and Caring,
By many you are adored,
You showed a true kindess
My faith in people, you restored.

A love for life,
Had Brought us all together,
The Good times we shared
We will remember them forever.

But just like they say, I suppose,
All good things come to an end.
But this is one good thing,
That has given me a life long friend.

Now its time, for you to fly,
Your duty has been done,
And I will watch you happily,
Disappear into the sun.

Back to where you came from,
An angel in disguise,
If u look back u will see,
A twinkle in my eyes.

Because you have touched my heart,
And helped me to see,
That everyone has a saviour,
And some things are just meant to be.

Its time for me to let go,
I can no longer keep you here.
Others are waiting patiently,
For you to wipe away their tear.

I cannot deny, I will cry,
As this blessing now ends,
But your in my heart, we'll never part,
Because you're a life long friend.

For D.S...i know your there!! x


© Copyright 2004 Stephanie Hill - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-07-01 04:36 PM


Unique -- I really liked this.  It had a real sweetness about it!   ....jo
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2 posted 2004-07-02 01:39 PM


Well I am not sure where your angel in disquise is going or came from, but if you had a brief encounter with the likes of this person, it was a blessing.  Nicely done.
UniqueFreak
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3 posted 2004-07-03 11:30 AM


thanks so much!! appreciated!
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-07-04 12:32 PM


very hearfelt and touching
miscellanea
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5 posted 2004-07-04 12:44 PM


very sweet; one never knows what will come, but you're right, good things never end.

          miscellanea  

Patricia
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6 posted 2004-07-04 03:56 PM


It sounds as if your friend left you with much.  Hold these teachings in your heart.

A lovely and tender write.

Patricia

UniqueFreak
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7 posted 2004-07-04 08:38 PM


thanks for your kinds words guys!

Stephi

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