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I Remember |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I Remember I look for you in the evenings a noticable absence from my care I see you in the distance upon the crest of the ocean's salty fair I hear you in the whisper of the water as it reaches for the sands and I slip as I long to touch you where the foam of water lands No time is like the present elusive to our being No sadness there can measure the loss of any living thing and so I wait for you in the evening while the ocean breeze moves to and fro and the sand recedes beneath my feet letting memories soothe my soul c2004simplygold |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
a fitting place for longing |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A pleasure to read! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
No sadness there can measure the loss of any living thing I am enjoying your soothing words tonight M |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is exactly it keeping this one  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
No sadness there can measure the loss of any living thing... Awesome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautifully sad to me |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
SimplyGold: This made me cry. You can feel the emotions so strong....it is so very bitter-sweet. Great Poem!! Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Happy to see this return Magnificent in it's face and features... TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 SimplyGold, This was so very lovingly phrased and gentle as an ocean breeze, and so true. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"and so I wait for you in the evening while the ocean breeze moves to and fro and the sand recedes beneath my feet letting memories soothe my soul" ~ Not only have I been missing you personally, I've been missing poetry such as this by you! Wondrously poetic! Great to read you again, SG! Big, warm hug, EA |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Earth Angel picked out my favorites lines up there. I like the poem, well done  Tara |
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