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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-06-30 02:06 PM

Play with me
                Glee sang merrily
                                 Abashed, humbled,
                                                 Let the words fall
                                                                        Haphazardly
Muse played
         I watched
            She smiled
                   Somehow,
                   All the words
Jelled – some semblance of sense
             From hazards happening.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2004-06-30 02:13 PM

this brought a chuckle to my face. like the light-hearted approach to what is possibly an angst-ridden problem to the author (?)

Jelled – some semblance of sense
From hazards happening.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-30 02:28 PM

*wink* & *understanding* and lots of luv from your sis in law (still working on an idea for that poem you suggested). ...jo

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-06-30 04:59 PM

Smiling here Karilea...you watch well.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2004-06-30 09:36 PM

some sense of hazard's happening; I like the idea of this; When this happens creativity is at it's best! Enjoyed!
miscellanea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-01 03:47 AM

awesome as always

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2004-07-01 05:45 AM

Very nice writing K..thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-07-01 06:24 AM

from the deepest of emotions and confusion, sometimes muses the best poems. Good one Sunshine...Good Morning

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-07-01 10:48 AM

Kari~

love this and you!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

9 posted 2004-07-01 10:51 AM

Always a pleasure to follow your mind's questing. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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