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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-06-30 07:30 AM



Fall rehearses,

as leaves that tango
on august breezes
succumbing as they dance
into the midnight hours,

in evergreens that line
the farmer's fields,
touching shoulders,
trees of jesus,

fall rehearses,

as summertime siestas
caught offguard,
impulsive and carefree

gawky weeds that stray
on roads to the unexpected,

wild eyed innocence

life of the child.

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-06-30 07:57 AM


inkedgoddess
It's all there to look upon, enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-06-30 08:04 AM


Beautiful Michele...I just hope fall doesn't sneak in too soon.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-06-30 08:26 AM


Oh Michele, this was gloriously beautiful, could not help but think of the absolutely beautiful weather we've been having here in PA, not to hot, not to cold, no humidity, pleasingly cool at night, wow!  

Anyway, lovely poem, thank you for the warm thoughts.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-06-30 09:32 AM


...I'm still smiling...

Warm, morning hug,
EA

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-06-30 12:39 PM


it will be a wonderful play, won't it?
garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-06-30 01:49 PM


I love your nature writes, Michele.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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7 posted 2004-06-30 05:30 PM


Michele -- it is sneaking around the corner alright.  Enjoy the summer!   ....jo
SimplyGold
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8 posted 2004-06-30 07:39 PM


Enjoyed this.  Childhood...

SG

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9 posted 2004-07-01 11:25 AM


A clever title...

an excellent poem.

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2004-07-01 11:42 AM


thanks for stopping by
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