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This Poetry |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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This Poetry maybe I forgot to dot the i or cross the t in the scribbles of myself and there are things crossed out un-erased still there as I live this poetry a heart that bleeds in ink surrounded by aching pages that begged for plural words "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yeah, know the feeling Wonderfully written and expressed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brilliant! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
refreshingly poetic. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
very well expressed, enjoyed the choice of words. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
fantastic red |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed ... I can relate Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done ma'am. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow....!!! Eric |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You just get better and better! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know Helen I have always held you as a favorite to read, and treasure the poems of yours I print and read in my "evening shade" book, but this one here - it is to me, you! Imagination is more important than knowledge... |
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